The pilot must land laughs on every page while establishing a situation the audience wants to revisit weekly. Your protagonist's comedic flaw needs to be both funny and sympathetic. The comedy 'engine' — workplace, family, fish-out-of-water — must be clear by the end of the pilot. Every supporting character needs at least one signature comic moment. Cold opens should get a laugh within 30 seconds. The pilot's A-story should be self-contained while the B-story plants seeds for the series. Multi-cam versus single-cam style should be evident from page one.
Cold open establishes comic tone (1-2 pages). Act one introduces the protagonist's world and the episode's comedic problem (8-10 pages). Act two complicates the situation through escalating misunderstandings (10-12 pages). Act three resolves the A-story with a callback and emotional beat, then tags with a final joke (5-7 pages). Half-hour target: 28-35 pages.
Start with the comic premise — write the logline first and make sure it makes people laugh in one sentence.
Give your protagonist a specific, relatable flaw that creates comedy naturally, not just funny situations around them.
Write the set pieces first — the three funniest scenes — then build the story to connect them.
Read your dialogue out loud. If it doesn't sound like how people actually talk, rewrite it.
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